His dirge of death-then strangely stupified, Torn from his straining arms, lay senseless by his side. Long, long he slept, till, starting with a gasp From that rude rock he scarce could loose his grasp As on a form unknown-but Love's true ray, And hung distracted o'er her, till her breast True were thy words, oh Prophet! Fierce and free Of that vast mount could scarce the shock of waters bide. Ah, wherefore shrink they back in wild affright? Round him a dusky tabernacle hung Of ambient mists-in pyramid and spire The broken clouds their folds fantastic flung, Is this their King, their God, their Saviour, Sun? He comes the Herald of JEHOVAH'S ire; And storm and tempest round his car are strown, We shall quote but one passage more; it occurs very near the conclusion of the poem. Now it is done. The swelling floods may rise None live to perish in the gulf profound; Devouring flames may dazzle o'er the skies None hear to startle at the thunder-sound There are but clouds above and waves around! But wilt thou rise, proud Ocean? Shall thy flood Once more grim Chaos o'er the boundless deep The surge hath ceased to roar, the blast to rave, No sound is heard the horrid stillness breaking; That dull and dreamless sleep which knows no earthly waking. Oh! there was terror in the storm's deep gloom, Where is the world? Alas! there is no Earth- He lives-but would'st thou question whither now Nor dare provoke the frown which bade a world expire. But Light not yet was quench'd, nor yet had Time Fulfill'd its fated round, The fortieth Sun Again through ether roll'd his car sublimeBut who survived to hail his rising? NoneTowers, Temples, Priests, Adorers, all are gone. As, ere JEHOVAH summon'd Earth to be, Light, new-created, hung in Heaven alone, So beams that Sun o'er one unbounded sea, For all beside have pass'd-Rocks! Mountains! where are ye? These passages may suffice to give an adequate idea of Mr Dale's success in the management of the noblest stanza in our language-the Spenserian. Most of the poets who write that stanza at present, give too much into imitation of the march which it as sumes in Childe Harold-Lord Byron's favourite mixture of hurried apostrophe or interrogation-with lofty and long strains of declamation. Mr Croly in particular, in his Angel of the World, fell into this error-for such imitation is always an error-in a way not quite worthy of his high genius. Mr Dale has adhered much more closely to the gentle flow of Spenser himself, and Thomson in the Castle of Indolence. The stanza so treated is surely not a whit less dignified. Indeed, we are of opinion that the solemn sweep of Mr Dale's versification is much more in unison with the character of the terrible subject with which he has dealt, and the profound emotions which he has endeavoured, and we think successfully, to raise. A number of very graceful minor pieces are annexed to the "Tale of the Flood," and some 66 Specimens of a projected New Translation of the Psalms." Of these last, we are sorry to say that we entirely disapprove. They have neither the simplicity nor the power which they ought to have. And in one word, we advise Mr Dale to think no more of an adventure which, to say nothing of lesser names, Robert Burns and Milton himself tried before him-and tried, like him, in vain. The best metrical version of the Psalms extant is the old German one. Perhaps by closely studying that model, something might be done; but even from that, our hopes are slender enough. FIRST NOTES OF AN INCIPIENT BALLAD-METRE-MONGER. DEAR CHRISTOPHER, I am true to my new profession as a poet, but for the life of me I cannot find out what line I am most fitted for. At one time I think I have an epic genius, and am half tempted to take up the "Caledoniad," which Jonathan Oldbuck recommended to Mr Lovel, and offered to decorate with notes-indeed, I have gone so far as to send a letter or two to that eminent antiquary, directed to Monkbarns, via Fairport, but I know not how it is, he is slow in replying; can they have miscarried? Perhaps he is not so much bent upon the work as he was formerly. In other moments I believe myself to be rather possessed of a talent for lyrics; and whether this shall be cultivated by the composition of gratis birth-day and new-year odes, since the Laureate cuts off the court with an exercise of hexameters, or whether I shall tune my throat to something bacchanalian, under the title of Devil's Punch-Bowl Melodies, is yet undetermined. For blank verse I find I have a decided partiality—and as our bards measure it out to us at present, (five feet, more or less, in a verse, and those not always free from symptoms of lameness,) it is the very "writing made easy" of all the poetic schools now going; but it by no means forms a "reading made easy" to the purchasers of their light labours. I call their labours light, because it is owing to the compositor in many instances that the poems assume the semblance of being verse at all. Let him, however, take care that the lines begin with capitals, and the world is good-natured enough to believe there VOL. XII. is rhythm in them, if it could be but discovered. My present attempt, as a balladwriter, arises from a disappointment I experienced from that arrant jiltflirt Maga. Poor Juliet twitted Romeo with the adage, that "at lovers' perjuries Jove laughs;" and so, I suppose, perforce, must the Jove of the nether sky, the ruler of Ebony's Olympus, at the perjuries of contributors; for, if he did not take this subcachinnating method of dissipating his spleen, his gizzard would become schirrous with fretting, his forehead would be intersected with more lines than all the new canals make, when scored in a new county map, and his brows would look like a finer forest than any there depictured. How many bantlings have been shewn forth in your pages, and have died off, poor things, without coming to full stature! How many series of "Hora" have been entered upon under your auspices, and how few of their authors have lived out their due number of hours! What promising introductory letters have escaped the doom of the Balaam-box, by their announcements of fine things to come in regular succession, but, like the house in Gray's Long Story, we are baulked by at length discovering that they contain " long passages that lead to nothing!" Numbers (I may well say so, but more of No. 1. than No. 2.) have there been of essays, sketches, cantos, melodies, surveys, remarks, critiques, analyses, &c. &c. professing to be the primary links in a chain of a length too extensive to have its measure made the subject of a rash guess; but, woe's me! this anticipa I ،، tory "stretch to the crack o' doom" has too often had a most lame and impotent conclusion; the stores of the too sanguine authors have seemed to be all spent in at most three specimens, perhaps in two, or, by'r lady," the hopes of the family have been vain, and No. 1. hath died without a successor, or any heir to his name! Now, among others, you whetted our appetites with some exquisite translations of Spanish or Moorish ballads, and, according to the tenor of either your declaration or your correspondent's, we were to have in due order, I know not what abundance of similar treats. But, lo! two Nos. of Horw Hispanica were the whole stock you dispensed to us, or rather, perhaps, the whole that was dispensed to you-and, excepting a slight pendant to them, by an Irish friend of yours, we have scraped no farther acquaintance with Castilians and Moriscoes, despite your promised intervention as master of the ceremonies. I have no pretence to supply this Iberian hiatus in the pages of Maga; but thinking that we had as fit subjects for the ballad measure in our neighbourhood, as Xarifa's Cushion, or Zara's Ear-rings, I cast my eyes about to fix on one. I had a notion of immortalizing the Pillion on which a Miss Gertrude Jaundice is in the habit of taking the air, as a counterpart to the chattel of Xarifa aforesaid -and who knows but that thereby I might have unseated Thomas, her groom, and like young Lochinvar have henceforth performed feats of horsemanship with a bride at my back? But the Guardian Genius of Miss Gertrude, and the Muse who condescends to watch over me, could not make up the match, I conclude; for in vain did I gnaw the feather-end of my pen,no inspiration took place, and the pillion is still an easy well-stuffed prosaic pillion, on which Miss Gertrude takes a quotidian bumping, and Thomas's waist is still girt with the strap by which his mistress steadies herself when Dobbin goes over a rough road. A lithographic print from a very clever sketch stopt the veering weathercock of my imagination, and you see it now points due north. The drawing I allude to is by a lady, who is more capable than I am of doing poetical justice by her pen to the handicrafts of her pencil. However, it has fallen to me to illustrate this amusing production of hers, and I have not introduced a single extraneous charac-. ter-all are to be seen in the graphic "Packing up;" and the only liberty I take with the puppets is, like Punch and Judy's master, to squeak for them, and make-believe that the conversation is theirs. And have we not as good materials for ballad-making at balls in England, as at bull-fights in Spain? Did Seville or Grenada yield better exemplifications of the essential passions of humanity, than the winter assemblies of our cities and county towns now continue to do? Love and hatred, emulation and jealousy, pride and vanity, malice and envy, and divers other mental combustibilities, on which Mrs Joanna Baillie either bestowed a tragedy and eke a comedy, or purposed to do so, if Mr Jeffrey had not entered a caveat,-do not they find there as free scope as in more romantic times and places? In the Vanity Fair which the Morisco ballads celebrate, the gentleman-moor attached the lady's heart, by turning bull's flesh into beef, if he could, with the risk of being gored as dead as mutton himself if he missed-but in our arena for suitors, the belle requires no such coarse encounters to be hazarded; it is sufficient that the inamorato whirl her about till she is giddy in a waltz, or shew off her paces or his own in a quadrille; and instead of killing the forest monarch Harpado, it is quite sufficient that, between the dances, the noble science of quizzing should be so well practised by him for the gratification of her private ear that, "At every word a reputation dies. Snuff, or the fan, supplies each pause of chat With singing, laughing, ogling, and all that." Yet you will find that my ballad does not even aspire so high as this in description; it is but the vestibule of the ball-room which I have as yet painted. Perhaps success will induce me to attempt to pourtray the inner regions. But I shall wait and see how the public receives my first essay, and listen to hear a similar eulogy which Goldsmith gave Tickell, namely, that there was a vein of ballad-thinking throughout his works. Should I hear any such decision, I shall march forward with a bold step, and perhaps purchase a fiddle or a bagpipe; till when,-I am yours, BLAISE FITZTRAVESTY. PACKING UP AFTER AN ENGLISH COUNTRY BALL. The clock has struck the midnight hour, and the chandeliers burn low, The gallery is clearing of the drowsy fiddlers twain; And he who blew the clarionet, with all his might and main, And he who made the tambourine ring and vibrate with his thumb, The Ball at the Red Lion is, at last, then at an end; All agree it has been a pleasant night, as down the stairs they wend; But oh! alas! and well-a-day! 'tis raining cats and dogs, The ladies rather wish, 'tis true, that the gentlemen were gone, To guard the three Miss Johnsons home, and their ancient maiden neighbour. So they're lolling on the table, waiting the damsels' 'hest, Yet though these beaux so welcome are, it still must be confess'd That the Captain, who's short-sighted, should not raise his quizzing glass. Come, little merry Mrs Cushion is first and foremost ready, With gown drawn through her pocket-holes, secure from dirt suburban, But see what's going on behind, where Emma Parkes is dressing! At least so think the tabbies-and I see Miss Prudence Herring, (Who, with sister Grace, is cloak'd to the chin, so at leisure to be peering,) But their tall prim niece is packing too, Miss Patience Prettyjohn, (Calashes are good things enough when the weather's wet and muggy, "Well, sister Grace," says Prue, "thank Heaven! our niece takes after us; "Uphold your dignity, my love! The boldest men, you see,— Once when a suitor knelt to me, imagine, if you can, The air with which I waved my hand, and said, Begone, base Man! |